English
In this quarter, we read a novel "The Outsiders" which mostly focused on 2 different class, the lower and the higher. The novel really showed about discrimination in the society. We usually read them together in class, discuss some questions regarding the chapter we read, and have quiz. For the assignment, we did a presentation and essay as the final assignment. As for the essay, my topic is about a quote that relates to at least two of the greasers' life.
Why was this sample my best work?
The essay was a sample of my best work because I have 4 quotes from the book which supported my ideas in the essay. I think I didn't do that great in the essay because I don't know what else to write.
What did I do well?
I have 4 quotes that supported my points well enough. I really examined the book in order to write a good and relevant idea about what the quote means and how it relates to the boys' lifes.
How can I improve?
I think I can improve by knowing about the flow of verb tenses. I often confused about either using past tense and present tense in writing an essay. I don't know how to change it to past tense at some point.
How does this sample relate to my chosen fundamental concept?
The sample is related to Communication because the assessments that are given are all about communicating. In the presentation, I present my idea so that the target audience will understand. In the essay, I deliver my idea and knowledge regarding the book what I learnt so far. As for holistic learning I learned about discrimination and prejudice from research and reading the book. In intercultural awareness, the novel made me aware about things happening in the society that is still happening until now.
Why was this sample my best work?
The essay was a sample of my best work because I have 4 quotes from the book which supported my ideas in the essay. I think I didn't do that great in the essay because I don't know what else to write.
What did I do well?
I have 4 quotes that supported my points well enough. I really examined the book in order to write a good and relevant idea about what the quote means and how it relates to the boys' lifes.
How can I improve?
I think I can improve by knowing about the flow of verb tenses. I often confused about either using past tense and present tense in writing an essay. I don't know how to change it to past tense at some point.
How does this sample relate to my chosen fundamental concept?
The sample is related to Communication because the assessments that are given are all about communicating. In the presentation, I present my idea so that the target audience will understand. In the essay, I deliver my idea and knowledge regarding the book what I learnt so far. As for holistic learning I learned about discrimination and prejudice from research and reading the book. In intercultural awareness, the novel made me aware about things happening in the society that is still happening until now.
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