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We made an advertisement with the topic time management, and wrote a reflective essay about the advertisement we made.
The picture is my group's advertisement about cheating.
Best work: Reflective Essay
Why was this sample my best work?
This sample was my best work because I put a lot of effort on making the essay and at the end the result is really good even though not perfect. I got 8, 8, and 7 for this essay and all of them are out of 10 so overall the result is good enough.
What did I do well?
I probably did well in giving ideas on this essay because for the criterion A which is knowledge and understanding I got 8 which is pretty good. It means that my understanding from the whole process is pretty good. I also got 8 for criterion B which is the structure of the essay so it means that the structure of my essay's body is good and the transition is good.
How can I improve?
I think I should improve on my language because as I said before, I got 7 for the language which is criterion C. I can improve it by putting more vocabularies and also thinking about more complicated sentences. Other than that i think I did my best on doing this project/making the advertisement.
How does this sample relate to communication?
This is relates to communication because an advertisement is a form of communication, which has some kind of moral for people. It is a form of communication for other people to know what we’re thinking, and what we think of the world and our environment, and what to do to make it better.
The picture is my group's advertisement about cheating.
Best work: Reflective Essay
Why was this sample my best work?
This sample was my best work because I put a lot of effort on making the essay and at the end the result is really good even though not perfect. I got 8, 8, and 7 for this essay and all of them are out of 10 so overall the result is good enough.
What did I do well?
I probably did well in giving ideas on this essay because for the criterion A which is knowledge and understanding I got 8 which is pretty good. It means that my understanding from the whole process is pretty good. I also got 8 for criterion B which is the structure of the essay so it means that the structure of my essay's body is good and the transition is good.
How can I improve?
I think I should improve on my language because as I said before, I got 7 for the language which is criterion C. I can improve it by putting more vocabularies and also thinking about more complicated sentences. Other than that i think I did my best on doing this project/making the advertisement.
How does this sample relate to communication?
This is relates to communication because an advertisement is a form of communication, which has some kind of moral for people. It is a form of communication for other people to know what we’re thinking, and what we think of the world and our environment, and what to do to make it better.
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